Bonjours, j'ai un oral d'anglais à la rentrée, et 'ai besoin d'une petite correction de texte. Ce n'est que des bout de phrase de mon texte. Merci Today I am go
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Bonjours, j'ai un oral d'anglais à la rentrée, et 'ai besoin d'une petite correction de texte. Ce n'est que des bout de phrase de mon texte. Merci
Today I am going talk about a chapter in class during the year
The main points I will be talking about are :
Firstly, I will talk about the life of Thomas Edison
Secondly, I will talk about his inventions that have revolutionized the world
Finaly, I will present a contest in search of a good invention.
Unfortunetly, this inventor is not with us because he died at the age of 84.
Let me turn now to the contest. America's Young Inventors is a contest in which a prize is given to the best inventor.
Even today, several people are looking for new useful creation for the world
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1. Réponse peg05
c'est correct mais il y a quelques petites choses à changer:
I will talk about his inventions which have... et pas that
FORTUNATELY et pas unfortunetly
bon courage